I have two questions regarding this

1- I am unable to recite Dua e abo Hamza Thumali in one go, can i recite it in breaks? For example i divide the dua in parts and recite parts of it each night.

2- Is it okay to recite the translation of dua ( the english part, because that way i can connect more with the dua as compared to arabic) or is it necessary to recite it in Arabic?

1. Yes that is fine and good practice

2. Definitely, as it’s important you understand what you’re reciting